Feedly+identifying mistakes

     Through today's lesson, I found Feedly even more useful than I did the last time when I added in everyone's blog address. The reason why I thought this is because I can follow so many different websites all at once. Until before - and even now, in order to catch up with the websites I want to follow, I have to convert every website into an app to keep it on my screen for my phone. In addition to this, I thought that it will make it easier for me to speed up my work. Now that I learnt a handy tool to make my everyday internet-lives even better, I would like to fully utilize them to raise the efficiency of my work.

     Regarding the identifying mistakes of other people's work, I found it difficult to identify someone's mistakes. As everyone has their own style of writing, I had to understand the reason behind the piece of writing. There were some mistakes I could not identify, and most of it were grammatical errors. This is because I as myself did not fully understand grammars literally. Since I learnt English in my daily lives at the international school, I didn't really think about grammars while I tried learning them. Maybe practices of them might be a good idea for further improvements. Although I have mentioned such points above, I enjoyed completing this work, and it was a good experience for me to look deeply into other people's writing. I honestly found a lot to learn from my classmates. In order to be a better writer, I may consider other people's style of writing and take them into my writing so that I can have variations.